Kia Ora,
Yesterday we did ATHLETICS DAY! my mum,brother,and also little baby sister came.
I was so happy they came because when they first got at school to watch me and my other siblings I kept on waving at them and I never stopped. My new ideas are to try my best next time I do Athletics day. I enjoyed sprinting today, it was fun!!! I found challenging trying to sprint in front of a lot of people. I came 2nd place I was so proud. I also made it to the final's but guess what I came 4th place. My next steps are to sprint faster than I did yesterday. By Rylie.
Tuesday, November 5, 2019
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Talofa lava Rylie,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Neha from Hay Park School. I really how you made a writing about athletics day. It seemed like you had a lot of fun. you made a really good writing. I also liked how you came 2nd place place and then you wwent to the finals and but you came 4th place. Maybe Next time you could add you ideas and if you have another athletics day try run faster.
From Neha.
Thank you very much Neha you are awesome!!! I really like how you made a comment. How wonderful of you.
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